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The Shock Hook Library.

Open with a fact that breaks the viewer's frame.

“I made [shocking amount] by [unexpected method]”
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Examples
  1. I.“I made $40k last month selling PDFs”
  2. II.“I made 6 figures from a faceless YouTube channel”
  3. III.“I made more in 3 hours freelancing than my 9-5 pays in a month”
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40 shock hook templates

  1. 1.

    I made [shocking amount] by [unexpected method]

    • “I made $40k last month selling PDFs”
    • “I made 6 figures from a faceless YouTube channel”
    • “I made more in 3 hours freelancing than my 9-5 pays in a month”
  2. 2.

    I [extreme action] and nothing bad happened

    • “I ate nothing but steak for 60 days and nothing bad happened”
    • “I skipped breakfast for a whole year and nothing bad happened”
    • “I cancelled every subscription for 90 days and nothing bad happened”
  3. 3.

    [Shocking statistic] about [topic] — verified

    • “43% of Americans have less than $1,000 in savings — verified”
    • “The average Instagram engagement rate is under 1% — verified”
    • “60% of couples share a bank password but not a Netflix password — verified”
  4. 4.

    You'd never believe [extreme thing] is legal

    • “You'd never believe fining your own employees is legal”
    • “You'd never believe charging $200 for a same-day ER visit is legal”
    • “You'd never believe dropshipping medical devices is legal”
  5. 5.

    I broke [famous record] in [surprising way]

    • “I broke my mile PR after eating a Big Mac”
    • “I broke the family Scrabble record while half-asleep”
    • “I broke my revenue record during a 2-week vacation”
  6. 6.

    [Number] [things] is [surprisingly small/large] — I counted

    • “20 grams of added sugar is in a single granola bar — I counted”
    • “18 different ads is on one NYT homepage scroll — I counted”
    • “5 hours of screen time is in a typical work lunch hour — I counted”
  7. 7.

    Turns out [wild claim] is actually true

    • “Turns out 'you never really know someone' is actually true”
    • “Turns out 'your body replaces itself every 7 years' is actually sort of true”
    • “Turns out 'most millionaires drive used Toyotas' is actually true”
  8. 8.

    You can [shocking loophole] and nobody's doing it

    • “You can deduct your gym membership as a business expense and nobody's doing it”
    • “You can write off your dog as a security guard and nobody's doing it (kind of)”
    • “You can appeal almost every medical bill and nobody's doing it”
  9. 9.

    [Celebrity/authority] got caught doing [extreme thing]

    • “A senator got caught reselling insulin on eBay”
    • “A wellness influencer got caught buying followers on launch day”
    • “A Fortune 500 CEO got caught driving for Uber on weekends”
  10. 10.

    The [price/cost] of [everyday thing] will blow your mind

    • “The real cost of owning a dog for 12 years will blow your mind”
    • “The total price of a Disney trip will blow your mind”
    • “The lifetime cost of a gym membership will blow your mind”
  11. 11.

    I quit [job] without [safety net]

    • “I quit my $220k job without another offer lined up”
    • “I quit medical school without telling my parents”
    • “I quit my agency without a single client to start with”
  12. 12.

    [Shocking comparison]: [A] is actually bigger than [B]

    • “Shocking comparison: Amazon is actually bigger than Walmart now”
    • “Shocking comparison: Taylor Swift's tour is actually bigger than the GDP of some countries”
    • “Shocking comparison: the protein industry is actually bigger than Hollywood”
  13. 13.

    I ate [extreme food item] every day for [duration]

    • “I ate 12 eggs every day for 60 days”
    • “I ate a whole avocado every morning for a year”
    • “I ate cereal for dinner every night for a month”
  14. 14.

    It costs $[shocking amount] to [simple thing] in [place]

    • “It costs $28 to park for an hour in Manhattan”
    • “It costs $14 for a smoothie at LAX”
    • “It costs $9,000 to rent a 1-bedroom in downtown SF”
  15. 15.

    I just saw [impossible-sounding event]

    • “I just saw a deer walk into an Apple Store”
    • “I just saw a guy propose during a marathon finish line”
    • “I just saw a baby's first word on a FaceTime screen from another state”
  16. 16.

    [Group] does [surprising thing] — every single day

    • “NBA rookies get full-body cryotherapy — every single day”
    • “Michelin chefs pre-cut garnishes at 4am — every single day”
    • “Top VCs write investor updates — every single day”
  17. 17.

    The real size of [thing] will mess with your brain

    • “The real size of Greenland vs. Australia will mess with your brain”
    • “The real size of a blue whale vs. a city bus will mess with your brain”
    • “The real size of SpaceX's Starship will mess with your brain”
  18. 18.

    This [small thing] costs more than [big thing]

    • “This skincare sample costs more than a full-size from Trader Joe's”
    • “This Pokémon card costs more than a used Honda Civic”
    • “This headphone jack costs more than the headphones”
  19. 19.

    I'm the first person to ever [extreme feat]

    • “I'm the first person to ever run an Ironman on a carnivore diet”
    • “I'm the first person to ever hit $1M ARR with only 2 team members in my niche”
    • “I'm the first person to ever hike the PCT in under 40 days”
  20. 20.

    [Kid/unusual person] just [extreme achievement]

    • “An 11-year-old just sold his app for $1.2M”
    • “A 72-year-old grandma just became a powerlifting champion”
    • “A blind teenager just soloed a 5.12 climb”
  21. 21.

    The [number] of [shocking metric] on [topic] is insane

    • “The number of ads you see daily is insane”
    • “The number of microplastics in your drinking water is insane”
    • “The number of subscriptions the average household has is insane”
  22. 22.

    This [setup/scene] isn't photoshop

    • “This cliff-edge pool isn't photoshop — it's in Bali”
    • “This kitchen stove island isn't photoshop — one person built it”
    • “This sunset timelapse isn't photoshop — it's one continuous shot”
  23. 23.

    I lost $[amount] in [short timeframe]

    • “I lost $40k in one afternoon”
    • “I lost $7,500 in a 90-second transfer”
    • “I lost $120k in 3 weeks and it was my fault”
  24. 24.

    [Taboo behavior] is the most common thing nobody admits

    • “Arguing about money in the car is the most common thing nobody admits”
    • “Googling your therapist's background is the most common thing nobody admits”
    • “Crying alone on a Sunday is the most common thing nobody admits”
  25. 25.

    We just discovered [extreme existence]

    • “We just discovered a lake under Antarctica”
    • “We just discovered a new organ in the human throat”
    • “We just discovered bacteria that eat plastic”
  26. 26.

    This [small thing] can do [massive thing]

    • “This $4 hand tool can do a $400 plumber visit”
    • “This 2-minute routine can erase weeks of back pain”
    • “This one email template can book 15 sales calls in a month”
  27. 27.

    [Shocking event] happened in [mundane location]

    • “A wedding proposal happened in the DMV line”
    • “A celebrity sighting happened in a Walmart snack aisle”
    • “A record-breaking dunk happened in a high school gym yesterday”
  28. 28.

    The [item] you use daily is actually made from [unexpected material]

    • “The chewing gum you use daily is actually made from the same base as rubber”
    • “The lipstick you use daily is actually made from fish scales”
    • “The beer you drink is actually clarified with fish bladders”
  29. 29.

    I bet my entire [savings/career] on [risky thing]

    • “I bet my entire savings on a $40k course”
    • “I bet my entire career on one LinkedIn post”
    • “I bet my entire Roth IRA on one tech stock”
  30. 30.

    A [small creature/object] is worth $[shocking amount]

    • “A single rare frog is worth $38,000”
    • “A single Magic: The Gathering card is worth $2 million”
    • “A single bluefin tuna is worth $3 million at Tsukiji market”
  31. 31.

    This [image/footage] is real — I checked

    • “This photo from 1900 New York is real — I checked”
    • “This drone footage of Greenland melting is real — I checked”
    • “This auction receipt is real — I checked”
  32. 32.

    Nobody believed me until I showed them [evidence]

    • “Nobody believed me until I showed them the bank statement”
    • “Nobody believed me until I showed them the ultrasound”
    • “Nobody believed me until I showed them the signed offer letter”
  33. 33.

    I [achievement] in [surprisingly short time]

    • “I paid off $80k in student loans in 14 months”
    • “I went from 0 to $30k MRR in 90 days”
    • “I benched 225 for the first time in 8 weeks of training”
  34. 34.

    [Famous person] started out doing [surprising thing]

    • “Jeff Bezos started out answering customer emails himself”
    • “Rihanna started out selling CDs in a Barbados mall”
    • “Warren Buffett started out selling chewing gum door to door”
  35. 35.

    The wait list for [thing] is [shocking N] years

    • “The wait list for the French Laundry is 18 months”
    • “The wait list for this preschool is 4 years”
    • “The wait list for this therapist is 27 months”
  36. 36.

    [Everyday person] is secretly [hidden identity]

    • “My Uber driver is secretly a former Goldman MD”
    • “My neighbor is secretly a #1 New York Times bestselling author”
    • “My yoga teacher is secretly a retired firefighter”
  37. 37.

    [Mundane object] just sold for $[shocking amount]

    • “A 1989 Nintendo game in plastic just sold for $2 million”
    • “A half-eaten cereal bowl from Britney Spears just sold for $20k”
    • “A single shoe from the 1992 Olympics just sold for $750,000”
  38. 38.

    I've seen it with my own eyes — [shocking thing]

    • “I've seen it with my own eyes — someone waiting 12 hours in a queue for a sneaker release”
    • “I've seen it with my own eyes — a toddler reading chapter books”
    • “I've seen it with my own eyes — a dog doing the dishes”
  39. 39.

    The most expensive [category] ever costs $[outrageous amount]

    • “The most expensive hamburger ever costs $6,000”
    • “The most expensive coffee ever costs $1,200 a cup”
    • “The most expensive cup of ramen ever costs $1,500”
  40. 40.

    [Authority] banned [surprising thing] — here's why

    • “Florida banned lab-grown meat — here's why”
    • “The EU banned TikTok on staff devices — here's why”
    • “San Francisco banned facial recognition — here's why”

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